Subject: Cotton finances
From: "Brinster, Jeremy" <[email-masked]>
To: "Yoxall, Collin" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 20 Apr 2016 07:11:16 -0700

Thanks for putting this together! It's really helpful to have all the information in one place, and the travel spending could be part of a larger narrative about his finances / hypocrisy. Take a look at the edits I attached-as I commented, if you're using semicolons or periods in a bullet header, that usually means it's better to break them up. Semicolons also tend to get in the way of making the bullet headers more straight-forward and sentence-like.