Subject: RE: top 10
From: "Crystal, Andy" <[email-masked]>
To: "Mohib, Laila" <[email-masked]>, "Lykins, Tyler" <[email-masked]>, Wei, Shu-Yen <[email-masked]>, "Palermo, Rachel" <[email-masked]>, Freundlich, Christina <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 12 May 2016 09:54:13 -0700

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From: Mohib, Laila
Sent: Thursday, May 12, 2016 12:35 PM
To: Crystal, Andy; Lykins, Tyler; Wei, Shu-Yen; Palermo, Rachel; Freundlich, Christina
Subject: FW: top 10

Thank you all for betting this yesterday.  Per Pratt's suggestions we added a new #4 and changed some language to make it more affirmative than negative seeming.

I know you have so much things on your to do plate (30, eh? - ha, ok bad joke).  Any chance we can get your eyes on this please? We didn't change any of the data so it's just a grammar and spelling and "does this make sense" read.

Thank you,
Laila

From: Mohib, Laila
Sent: Thursday, May 12, 2016 12:08 PM
To: Kate Houghton
Subject: top 10

Kate,

Here are pratt's suggested changes.  He made the language more "accessible" and changed #4.

Let me know if you are good to go with these so I can send it through the comms and research approval process and get it back to digital asap.

Thanks,
laila