Subject: Notes for 2016.05.14 Speech - Alaska State Convention
From: <[email-masked]>
To: Luis Miranda <[email-masked]>, Garret Bonosky <[email-masked]>, <[email-masked]>, Liana Guerra <[email-masked]>, Tracie Pough <[email-masked]>, Kate Houghton <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 14 May 2016 11:09:28 -0800

Here it is with my changes. We need a natural point to stop earlier in case the jeering gets too bad to give this long of a speech. Please let me know where that would be. Thanks. 

 Summary for: 2016.05.14 Speech - Alaska State Convention

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  Comment: to

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  Comment: I applaud them for their commitment and their leadership. Please give them a round of applause. 

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  Comment: understand

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  Comment: who

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  Comment: we

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  Comment: But the down ballot losses we've experienced  matter just as much. 

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  Comment: five out

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  Comment: because I DO count Florida as a win since the Supreme Court chose the president that year!

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  Comment: strongly

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  Comment: Destruction like 

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  Comment: and obstruction like blocking

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  Comment: and

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  Comment: Or

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  Comment: attempt by President Obama to move us forward

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  Comment: NOTE: WE NEED TO EDIT THIS PARAGRAPH TO REFLECT THAT WE PROVIDE MORE FUNDING AND INFRASTRUCTURE THAN EVER BEFORE, EVEN DURING HOWARD DEAN'S TENURE. PLEASE WORDSMITH.

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  Comment: provided

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  Comment: a

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  Comment: after

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  Comment: opponents

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  Comment: his

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  Comment: which is why

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  Comment: only a candidate!

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  Comment: much of this

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  Comment: eventually

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