Subject: Re: RHB Harvard Speech
From: "Eric Schwerin" <[email-masked]>
To: "Hunter Biden" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 27 Apr 2011 19:17:15 -0400

Yup - I'd also simplify the language is some places.  A little flowery where it isn't necessary and making it a little simpler and more declarative would help you when you deliver it. I'll take a whack at that if you agree?

Eric D. Schwerin
[email-masked]

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On Apr 27, 2011, at 7:06 PM, Hunter Biden <[email-masked]> wrote:

> I like it but want to work on transition into last two paragraphs. I'm not quite sure what they are trying to say. Also can you try to beef up the drain the beast hypocrisy-- more quotes and clearer articulation of why the Feds need to lead.  I also asked Mike to ad in Ormazabal when we have more info.  Finally, I think I should reflect some on what it is like to do business in Spain and why more American business should be flowing east. 
> 
> R. Hunter Biden
> Rosemont Seneca Partners
> 202-333-1880
> 
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>> From: Michael Muldoon <[email-masked]>
>> Date: April 27, 2011 5:50:48 PM EDT
>> To: Hunter Biden <[email-masked]>, Alexander Snyder-Mackler <[email-masked]>, [email-masked], Eric Schwerin <[email-masked]>
>> Subject: RHB Harvard Speech
>> 
> 
>> Hey Guys,
>> 
>> Latest draft is attached - have at it. If you can try and get me your
>> comments by Friday morning I can incorporate them without having to
>> recirculate updated drafts.
>> 
>> Thanks for your help!
>> 
>> Best,
>> Mike
>> 
>> -- 
>> Mike Muldoon
>> Rosemont Seneca Partners, LLC
>> 1010 Wisconsin Ave., NW
>> Suite 705
>> Washington, DC 20007
>> (202) 333-1880
>> [email-masked]
>> <RHB Harvard Speech (May 2011).doc