Subject: #6 University of Michigan for Public Service
From: "Roberta Buhle" <[email-masked]>
To: "Naomi Biden" <[email-masked]>, "Biden Hunter" <[email-masked]>, "Biden Kathleen" <[email-masked]>, "Schwerin Eric" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 29 Oct 2011 11:30:47 -0400 (EDT)

Naomi asked me to work on this one first. It was #6 on the list that Hunter sent to me.
Gramma

-----Original Message-----
>From: Naomi Biden <[email-masked]>
>Sent: Oct 28, 2011 11:47 PM
>To: Roberta <[email-masked]>
>Subject: RE: college application essays
>
>Yes of course!
>
>-----Original Message-----
>From: Roberta [mailto:[email-masked]]
>Sent: Fri 10/28/2011 9:45 PM
>To: Naomi Biden
>Subject: Re: college application essays
> 
>Is it ok if I work on this early tomorrow morning and send then?
>
>Sent from my iPhone
>
>On Oct 28, 2011, at 7:02 PM, "Naomi Biden" <[email-masked]> wrote:
>
>> Thanks! 
>> here is the first sentence: The University of Michigan's extensive course offerings and world-renowned reputation make it appealing to every applicant.
>> 
>> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Roberta Buhle [mailto:[email-masked]]
>> Sent: Fri 10/28/2011 7:47 PM
>> To: Naomi Biden
>> Subject: Re: college application essays
>> 
>> Working on it now. What is the first sentence of the one you mention below (500 word Michigan supplement). I'm getting confused and that would help me.
>> Gramma
>> 
>> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Naomi Biden <[email-masked]>
>>> Sent: Oct 28, 2011 5:13 PM
>>> To: [email-masked]
>>> Subject: college application essays
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Hi Grandma, I really appreciate how much you are helping me with everything. This is a document that has every essay that I will be submitting to Michigan and Penn this tuesday. I especially need help with the 500 word Michigan supplement. If you could look that essay/any of the essays over when you get a chance it would be GREATLY appreciated. I'm struggling with writing coherent sentences...
>>> love you
>> 
>> 
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