Subject: Re: Beau announcement 4:15 .doc?
From: "hurricane5155" <[email-masked]>
To: "Jim Smith" <[email-masked]>, "Molly Magarik" <[email-masked]>
Cc: "Hunter Biden" <[email-masked]>, "Mike Donilon" <[email-masked]>, "Ted Kaufman" <[email-masked]>, "Josh Alcorn" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 15 Apr 2014 20:28:52 -0400

definitely take out take care line for press release.  vbo
On Apr 15, 2014, at 8:22 PM, Josh Alcorn <[email-masked]> wrote:

> I think there is plenty of good stuff here. The "four year commitment" section is gold. 
> 
> One of the things I liked in the last draft was the tight link between the thought of Gov in 2016 and the decision not to run now. I would suggest flipping that sixth graf (therefore, I am announcing...) with the seventh. 
> 
> With that change, the thought process you went through is explained before your decision is announced.
> 
> One clarification: is this a press release or an email to supporters? If an email, the "take care" ending is good. But if it's a press release, I suggest cutting that. 
> 
> Curious to hear other thoughts. 
> 
> /ja
> 302-598-1885 (cell)
> 
> Sent from my iPhone, which is responsible for any typos. 
> 
>> On Apr 15, 2014, at 7:38 PM, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]> wrote:
>> 
>> All--
>> 
>> Please see attached for the draft statement that Beau and Valerie worked on this afternoon. 
>> 
>> Release is slated for Thursday, so please send any edits ASAP.
>> 
>> Thank you,
>> Molly
>> 
>> 
>> <Beau announcement 4_15 .v.2doc.doc>

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