Subject: suggestions as for the AP response
From: "Vadim Pozharskyi" <[email-masked]>
To: "Hunter Biden" <[email-masked]>, "Mason Archer Yost" <[email-masked]>, "Devon Archer" <[email-masked]>, "Alan Apter" <[email-masked]>, "Toohey, Ryan" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 2 Jun 2014 14:19:37 +0300

Dear colleagues,

Please consider my suggestions to the point 1.1

1.1.  Nikolai Zlochevsky is a prominent Ukrainian and the sole investor in
Burisma Holdings {Brocity Investments).* It is important to note that
Burisma is one of many investments he has made in Ukraine and elsewhere*

As a reader, i want to raise a question "what other investments has Mr
Zlochevsky made both in Ukraine and elsewhere, and if so, whether Hunter
Biden helps him in his other commitments". I personally fear that by
answering this way we may create additional questions.

I fully agree that it has to be emphasized on numerous occasions that Mr
Zlochevsky is a businessman, who has been consistently working for many
years on improving the company and its structure, since it is his life-work.
With this in mind, it's only natural that the company is constantly
developing in order to reach new horizons and move to a new level.

For that purpose, in 2013 Burisma adopted a Western-style governance
structure including a Board of Directors, Strategic Planning Committee,
Audit Committee, and Corporate Secretary.

Could we slightly rephrase this point taking into account given above
ideas.

Thank you so much for your help,
Best,
Vadi