Subject: Re: suggestions as for the AP response
From: "Toohey, Ryan" <[email-masked]>
To: "Vadim Pozharskyi" <[email-masked]>
Cc: "Hunter Biden" <[email-masked]>, "Mason Archer Yost" <[email-masked]>, "Devon Archer" <[email-masked]>, "Alan Apter" <[email-masked]>, "Pacheco, Lawrence" <[email-masked]>, "McInerney, Jamie" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 2 Jun 2014 11:38:45 +0000

Vadim -

Thanks. I understand what you are getting at. Let's discuss on the phone. Will you be able to join our 10am call?

Thanks

On Jun 2, 2014, at 7:19 AM, "Vadim Pozharskyi" <[email-masked]><mailto:[email-masked]>> wrote:

Dear colleagues,

Please consider my suggestions to the point 1.1

1.1.  Nikolai Zlochevsky is a prominent Ukrainian and the sole investor in Burisma Holdings {Brocity Investments). It is important to note that Burisma is one of many investments he has made in Ukraine and elsewhere

As a reader, i want to raise a question "what other investments has Mr Zlochevsky made both in Ukraine and elsewhere, and if so, whether Hunter Biden helps him in his other commitments". I personally fear that by answering this way we may create additional questions.

I fully agree that it has to be emphasized on numerous occasions that Mr Zlochevsky is a businessman, who has been consistently working for many years on improving the company and its structure, since it is his life-work.
With this in mind, it's only natural that the company is constantly developing in order to reach new horizons and move to a new level.

For that purpose, in 2013 Burisma adopted a Western-style governance structure including a Board of Directors, Strategic Planning Committee, Audit Committee, and Corporate Secretary.

Could we slightly rephrase this point taking into account given above ideas.

Thank you so much for your help,
Best,
Vadim

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