Subject: Edits to SOE Reform Fund Pitch Book
From: "Michael Leonard" <[email-masked]>
To: <[email-masked]>
Cc: <[email-masked]>, "James Bulger" <[email-masked]>, "Hunter Biden" <[email-masked]>, "Devon Archer" <[email-masked]>, "Eric" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 19 May 2015 17:24:46 -0400

Xin,

Eric Schwerin (from Hunter's office) and I had a conference call today
regarding the company descriptions in the BHR SOE Reform pitch book on page
28. We edited the Rosemont and Thornton descriptions a little bit and those
new descriptions can be found on page 28 of the attached PowerPoint.

I wasn't sure who to direct this email to at BHR so I figured I could send
this along to you and you could pass it along to whoever coordinating the
pitch book drafts within the office.

The reason for the slight changes is because some of the references had a
political overtone that does not read right to an American audience. Eric
and I went ahead and made edits to make reflect our sensitivities in this
regard.

If you have any questions I would be happy to elaborate on a call.
Moreover, if there are suggested edits to the Rosemont and Thornton
description we are very happy to consider them.

Many thanks,
Mike

-- 
Michael R. Leonard
Vice President, Operations Department
Thornton Group LLC
14 Beacon Street, Suite 804A
Boston, MA 02108
Office: 617-248-9440
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