Subject: ??: Edits to SOE Reform Fund Pitch Book
From: 王昕 <[email-masked]>
To: "'Michael Leonard'" <[email-masked]>
Cc: <[email-masked]>, "'James Bulger'" <[email-masked]>, "'Hunter Biden'" <[email-masked]>, "'Devon Archer'" <[email-masked]>, "'Eric'" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 20 May 2015 09:48:55 +0800

Many thanks for this Mike.  I am fine with the changes and attach the updated booklet in its entirety (we also updated the Sinopec numbers).   

 

发件人: [email-masked] [mailto:[email-masked]] 代表 Michael Leonard
发送时间: Wednesday, May 20, 2015 5:25 AM
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抄送: [email-masked]; James Bulger; Hunter Biden; Devon Archer; Eric
主题: Edits to SOE Reform Fund Pitch Book

Xin,

Eric Schwerin (from Hunter's office) and I had a conference call today regarding the company descriptions in the BHR SOE Reform pitch book on page 28. We edited the Rosemont and Thornton descriptions a little bit and those new descriptions can be found on page 28 of the attached PowerPoint.

I wasn't sure who to direct this email to at BHR so I figured I could send this along to you and you could pass it along to whoever coordinating the pitch book drafts within the office.

The reason for the slight changes is because some of the references had a political overtone that does not read right to an American audience. Eric and I went ahead and made edits to make reflect our sensitivities in this regard.

If you have any questions I would be happy to elaborate on a call. Moreover, if there are suggested edits to the Rosemont and Thornton description we are very happy to consider them. 

Many thanks,

Mike

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