Subject: Re: Brochure Revised (UNCLASSIFIED)
From: "Ron Olivere" <[email-masked]>
To: "Kubik, Christine F NFG NG DEARNG \(US\)" <[email-masked]>
Cc: "Dieleuterio, John M NFG \(US\)" <[email-masked]>, <[email-masked]>, "Fred Sears" <[email-masked]>, "Geoff Rogers" <[email-masked]>, <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 20 Aug 2015 07:36:38 -0400

Thank you Christine I think your suggestions are excellent I also found some of the info hard to discern however I didn't know how to correct them.  I'll pass this forward to others on the committee.  I'll keep in touch.
Thanks again
Ron

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> On Aug 19, 2015, at 4:22 PM, Kubik, Christine F NFG NG DEARNG (US) <[email-masked]> wrote:
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> Ron and John, 
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> I offer the following thoughts and suggestions, all in my humble opinion, based on experience organizing many fundraising events.  I walked away from the first meeting, hearing more that this event is a great chance to debut the mission, the foundation and the advocacy that will be taken on.   Raising the dollars will easily be accomplished.   I agree!
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> Suggestions for your consideration:    
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> 1.  Front cover -- Beau's photo and the foundation logo should be larger than the golf ball.   Add "Monday" for the date, as well as the street address of the WCC, especially since the advertisement would be spread nationwide. 
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> 2.  Inside top - view attached; suggest re-order the first 4 paragraphs plus a few phrases added in.  If there is a "mission statement" that has been agreed upon by the Foundation, it should absolutely be included here.  Remove the quotes around the blue text; not sure why they are there.    In the red box/timelines, add in that there is an Auction (I think the final decision at last meeting was it was a Live Auction).   
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> Red box under photo -- change to read:  
> 11:30AM  Shotgun Start, Scramble Format 
> 5:00PM    Cocktail Reception, Auction, and Awards
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> 3.  Inside Bottom:   corrected phrases and wording on the lower left pricing/green Box -- Found the prices and listing for sponsors jumbled, and hard to follow, as well as a few things missing -- see attached for Green Box edit to simplify.
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> Any "hole-in-one" prizes?    
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> Proforma Stmt indicated "2" for Title Gold Sponsor, but only one $25,000 in revenue column.   Think it should be 1, not 2.  
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> Finally, I read Mr. Gardner's note below - about fees and requiring more time and effort with some additional staffing needed the day of the event.   If we find ourselves needing to support the event with Volunteers vetted from within our veteran networks (that I use for our golf events) -- I would be happy to lead the charge - so it will not add expense to the event -- and more dollars are directed to the mission of the Foundation.
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> Thank you for the opportunity to contribute.  
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> Best regards,
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> CHRISTINE F. KUBIK
> DELAWARE NATIONAL GUARD
> COMMUNITY RELATIONS SPECIALIST 
> O  302.326.7582
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Dieleuterio, John M NFG (US) 
> Sent: Wednesday, August 19, 2015 11:20 AM
> To: Kubik, Christine F NFG NG DEARNG (US) <[email-masked]>
> Subject: FW: Brochure Revised (UNCLASSIFIED)
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> Classification: UNCLASSIFIED
> Caveats: NONE
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> Chris:  Take a look at the draft program and see what you think.
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> 
> John M. DiEleuterio
> Dir-Intergovernmental Relations
> Delaware National Guard
> 250 Airport Rd.
> New Castle DE  19720
> 302-326-7837  
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ron Olivere [mailto:[email-masked]] 
> Sent: Wednesday, August 19, 2015 7:45 AM
> To: Dieleuterio, John M NFG (US) <[email-masked]>
> Subject: Fwd: Brochure Revised
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> What do you think ?
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> Sent from my iPad
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> Begin forwarded message:
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>    From: "Bill Gardner" <[email-masked] <mailto:[email-masked]> >
>    Date: August 19, 2015 at 6:25:40 AM EDT
>    To: "'Ron Olivere'" <[email-masked] <mailto:[email-masked]> >
>    Subject: RE: Brochure Revised
>    Reply-To: <[email-masked] <mailto:[email-masked]> >
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>    Revised attached….
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>    I believe I made all the changes you mentioned on the phone including squaring off the logo.   Please review for corrections / additions.
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>    I also updated the P/L attached (Draft / Estimate Only)
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>    As for my fees of $4,500 with the addition of both courses now being used it will require more time and effort with some additional staffing the day of the event, if this is an issue we can discuss.
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>    How many invitations are we going to need in order to get printed ?
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>    Before moving ahead I feel we should meet and make sure we are on the same page and I fully understand what the club is doing and providing the day of.
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>    William L. Gardner
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>    From: Ron Olivere [mailto:[email-masked]] 
>    Sent: Tuesday, August 18, 2015 8:33 PM
>    To: <[email-masked] <mailto:[email-masked]> >
>    Subject: Re: Brochure
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>    Leave off Josh, and Ian it's ok for Ashley, Hallie & Hunter.  Josh may return if the VP doesn't run. 
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>    Sent from my iPad
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>    On Aug 17, 2015, at 4:08 PM, Bill Gardner <[email-masked] <mailto:[email-masked]> > wrote:
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>        Who else should be listed as committee members ?   I left off Hunter, Ashley, Josh, Ian and Hallie… (Wasn’t sure you or they wanted to be listed)
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>        How many invites should I plan for ?
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>        William L. Gardner
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>        t/a Links Worldwide
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>        [email-masked] <mailto:[email-masked]> 
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>        <Beau Biden 2015 Brochure - Rev2.pdf>
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> <The Beau Biden Foundation - text edits.docx>
> <green box edits.pdf>
> <green box edits.docx>
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