Subject: Re: Op-ed
From: "Joshua Alcorn" <[email-masked]>
To: "Ashley Biden" <[email-masked]>
Cc: "Hallie" <[email-masked]>, "Hunter Biden" <[email-masked]>, "Valerie Biden Owens" <[email-masked]>, "Patty Dailey Lewis" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 3 Apr 2016 18:00:43 -0400

Any additional feedback? Per Hunter’s suggestion I changed one sentence: 
"our entire family wanted to make sure his fight to protect children continued” rather than “his brother, sister and I"
Revised draft attached and updated in the google drive.
Valerie or Hallie, if you have any edits, please let me know tomorrow morning, as we’ll shoot this over to Jason Levine at the News Journal after lunch.
Thanks,
Josh

Joshua Alcorn
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> On Apr 1, 2016, at 2:14 PM, Ashley Biden <[email-masked]> wrote:
> 
> Tears and pride. I love it. Love you all.
>  
> From: Josh Alcorn [mailto:[email-masked]] On Behalf Of Joshua Alcorn
> Sent: Friday, April 01, 2016 1:28 PM
> To: Hallie; Hunter Biden; Ashley Biden; Valerie Biden Owens
> Cc: Patty Dailey Lewis
> Subject: Op-ed
>  
> Hello,
> I’ve attached, and included in the google drive, the draft of the op-ed Patty and I will pitch to the News Journal for publication next week. Once we started drafting this document, we decided against including a survivor of abuse as a co-author. We can always come back to that idea in the future.
> Please take a look and let Patty and me know what you think. This is the first lengthy public statement Hallie has made about the Foundation, and so I want to make sure it’s perfect. For what it’s worth, I think it’s great, but want your feedback.
> If you can take a look today or over the weekend, that would be great. I’d like to pitch this to the opinion page editor on Monday.
> Thank you,
> Josh