Subject: Re: New speech
From: "Eric Schwerin" <[email-masked]>
To: "Alexander S. Mackler" <[email-masked]>
Cc: "Hunter Biden" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 11 May 2016 09:31:35 -0400

Not sure what Hunter’s thoughts are but to me this is much, much better.  

Eric D. Schwerin
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> On May 10, 2016, at 11:14 PM, Alexander S. Mackler <[email-masked]> wrote:
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> Hunter,
> 
> Here is an updated version of the speech. A few hundred words shorter, now about 8 minutes as delivered. Cut out most of the stuff about Bradley, and tried to make it more personal. It's much more about B and what made him tick.
> 
> I think there are a couple of transitions that could be a bit smoother, so I'll take another stab in the morning. Let me know if this is more on track with what you want to deliver.
> 
> Because it's pretty different than the last draft you saw, I also attached that draft (dated 160502). The updated version is marked "RHB."
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> Alexander Snyder Mackler
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> <160502 NCMEC Speech.docx><RHB NCMEC Speech.docx>