Subject: Re: University of Delaware press release
From: "Don Graves" <[email-masked]>
To: "Kate Bedingfield" <[email-masked]>
Cc: "Mike Donilon" <[email-masked]>, <[email-masked]>, "Robert Peters" <[email-masked]>, "Valerie Biden Owens" <[email-masked]>, "Steve Ricchetti" <[email-masked]>, "Hunter Biden" <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 2 Feb 2017 14:49:50 -0500

Does "broader" imply that the range of issues the VP has worked on or will work on is somehow less than the school of public policy or that he hasn't worked on every issue. I wonder if is worth cutting that out as well. 

Don Graves

> On Feb 2, 2017, at 2:41 PM, Kate Bedingfield <[email-masked]> wrote:
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> got it 
> 
>> On Thu, Feb 2, 2017 at 1:43 PM, <[email-masked]> wrote:
>> I would say yes -- we should cut that one word -- the sentence works without it -- then it doesn't veer into UPenn territory.
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>> From: Melvyn I. Monzack <[email-masked]>
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>> Subject: RE: University of Delaware press release
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>> Is use of the term ”global” problematic ?
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>> From: Kate Bedingfield [mailto:[email-masked]] 
>> Sent: Thursday, February 02, 2017 1:21 PM
>> To: Robert Peters; Valerie Biden Owens; Melvyn I. Monzack; Mike Donilon; Steve Ricchetti; Don Graves; Hunter Biden
>> Subject: University of Delaware press release
>>  
>> Here's the draft release with both UDel's edits and mine.  As I told the VP on the phone, Assanis wants to hold the news of the naming of the public policy school in order to do a bigger event on it down the line.  So the release is the announcement of the Institute, which I think is fine.
>>  
>> Let me know of any concerns and edits.  We are planning for a Tuesday morning 2/7 rollout. Thanks!
>> Kate 
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