Subject: Re: Latest Version of the Memo
From: Adrienne Elrod <[email-masked]>
To: John Podesta <[email-masked]>
Cc: Brian Fallon <[email-masked]>, Navin Nayak <[email-masked]>, Christina Reynolds <[email-masked]>, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>, Dennis Cheng <[email-masked]>, Heather Stone <[email-masked]>, Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>, Jenna Lowenstein <[email-masked]>, Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>, Kate Offerdahl <[email-masked]>, Kristina Schake <[email-masked]>, Marlon Marshall <[email-masked]>, Maya Harris <[email-masked]>, Oren
Date: Wed, 16 Mar 2016 13:19:50 -0400

Revised points per John's edits (h/t to Milia for making eds).
Note - content has not been changed per the bunnies and rainbows direction
John mentioned

On Wed, Mar 16, 2016 at 6:11 AM, John Podesta <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> I'd say make a positive difference in people's lives and get incomes
> growing
> I'd add negative before ad in the Sanders negativity section. That's
> implied but I'd make it explicit.
> I'm worried that we have gone to far in the future bunnies and rainbows
> direction and have forgotten people's pain and anxiety
>
> On Wednesday, March 16, 2016, Brian Fallon <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
>
>> And attached are TPs for surrogates, drawn in part from Navin's memo.
>>
>> On Wed, Mar 16, 2016 at 12:43 AM, Navin Nayak <[email-masked]>
>> wrote:
>>
>>>
>>> Here's the latest version with all the edits I've gotten.
>>>
>>> One note to flag, I've elevated the historic nature of what she's on the
>>> cusp of achieving: first woman to be presidential nominee.
>>>
>>> Get me any additional edits by 9am. Y make a positive difference in
>>> people's lives and get incomes growing. In the section on Sander's
>>> negativity, I would call it a negative ad. That's implied but I'd add
>>> negative as an adjective. I think we have slipped too much into
>>>
>>> Thanks
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>

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