Subject: Re: Latest Version of the Memo
From: Adrienne Elrod <[email-masked]>
To: Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>
Cc: John Podesta <[email-masked]>, Brian Fallon <[email-masked]>, Navin Nayak <[email-masked]>, Christina Reynolds <[email-masked]>, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>, Dennis Cheng <[email-masked]>, Heather Stone <[email-masked]>, Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>, Jenna Lowenstein <[email-masked]>, Kate Offerdahl <[email-masked]>, Kristina Schake <[email-masked]>, Marlon Marshall <[email-masked]>, Maya Harris <[email-masked]>, Oren Shur <oshu
Date: Wed, 16 Mar 2016 15:05:37 -0400

sorry - confusing headline.
the memo is out to the press/top talkers.
these  are additional talking points to send to top talkers.
but most of are folks  going on TV are good w/ amplifying the content of
the memo, so no major rush.

On Wed, Mar 16, 2016 at 3:02 PM, Jennifer Palmieri <
[email-masked]> wrote:

> Is this out? Thought we were giving to press as well as talkers.
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
> On Mar 16, 2016, at 2:02 PM, Adrienne Elrod <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
>
> checking in - anyone else have any edits?
> would like to move these to some of our close friends/allies who are doing
> press today
>
> On Wed, Mar 16, 2016 at 1:19 PM, Adrienne Elrod <[email-masked]
> > wrote:
>
>> Revised points per John's edits (h/t to Milia for making eds).
>> Note - content has not been changed per the bunnies and rainbows
>> direction John mentioned
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Mar 16, 2016 at 6:11 AM, John Podesta <[email-masked]>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> I'd say make a positive difference in people's lives and get incomes
>>> growing
>>> I'd add negative before ad in the Sanders negativity section. That's
>>> implied but I'd make it explicit.
>>> I'm worried that we have gone to far in the future bunnies and rainbows
>>> direction and have forgotten people's pain and anxiety
>>>
>>> On Wednesday, March 16, 2016, Brian Fallon <[email-masked]>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> And attached are TPs for surrogates, drawn in part from Navin's memo.
>>>>
>>>> On Wed, Mar 16, 2016 at 12:43 AM, Navin Nayak <
>>>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Here's the latest version with all the edits I've gotten.
>>>>>
>>>>> One note to flag, I've elevated the historic nature of what she's on
>>>>> the cusp of achieving: first woman to be presidential nominee.
>>>>>
>>>>> Get me any additional edits by 9am. Y make a positive difference in
>>>>> people's lives and get incomes growing. In the section on Sander's
>>>>> negativity, I would call it a negative ad. That's implied but I'd add
>>>>> negative as an adjective. I think we have slipped too much into
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>
>>
>> --
>>
>> Adrienne K. Elrod
>> Director of Strategic Communications & Surrogates
>> Hillary For America
>> *www.hillaryclinton.com <http://www.hillaryclinton.com>*
>> @adrienneelrod
>>
>
>
>
> --
>
> Adrienne K. Elrod
> Director of Strategic Communications & Surrogates
> Hillary For America
> *www.hillaryclinton.com <http://www.hillaryclinton.com>*
> @adrienneelrod
>
>

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Adrienne K. Elrod
Director of Strategic Communications & Surrogates
Hillary For America
*www.hillaryclinton.com <http://www.hillaryclinton.com>*
@adrienneelrod