Subject: Re: DRAFT: Talking Points for NRDC call
From: Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>
To: Emily Aden <[email-masked]>
Cc: Nick Merrill <[email-masked]>, Kristina Costa <[email-masked]>, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>, Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, Trevor Houser <[email-masked]>, Pete Ogden <[email-masked]>, Ben Kobren <[email-masked]>, Milia Fisher <[email-masked]>, Sara Latham <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 19 Oct 2015 17:22:01 -0400
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

All good. But let's be careful about the "hunting down Chinese line". That
didn't go over well with AAPI and younger coalition groups.

Sent from my iPhone

On Oct 19, 2015, at 5:12 PM, Emily Aden <[email-masked]> wrote:

Sure, we can keep as is. Our reason for suggesting the change is that we've
made that change for other things she worked on closely with the White
House.

On Mon, Oct 19, 2015 at 5:07 PM, Nick Merrill <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> I think you could get away with "launched."  If I remember correctly, we
> led the way on building the coalition, and it was her that hosted and
> keynoted the actual launch event at the department...What do you think
> Emily?
>
> On Mon, Oct 19, 2015 at 5:03 PM, Emily Aden <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
>
>> We think it should be 'helped launch the Climate and Clean Air
>> Coalition...' otherwise good for research
>>
>>
>>
>> On Mon, Oct 19, 2015 at 4:35 PM, Kristina Costa <
>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>
>>> Thanks Joel – will rework that SecState graf to that end.
>>> Research/political/comms, folks good?
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> *From:* Joel Benenson [mailto:[email-masked]]
>>> *Sent:* Monday, October 19, 2015 3:18 PM
>>> *To:* Kristina Costa <[email-masked]>
>>> *Cc:* Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>; Trevor Houser <
>>> [email-masked]>; Pete Ogden <[email-masked]>; Ben Kobren <
>>> [email-masked]>; Milia Fisher <[email-masked]>; Sara
>>> Latham <[email-masked]>
>>> *Subject:* Re: DRAFT: Talking Points for NRDC call
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Add in the story from debate about Obama and her barging into secret
>>> meeting and getting first concessions ever out of China.  That's the kind
>>> of stuff they need to know.
>>>
>>> Sent from my iPad
>>>
>>>
>>> On Oct 19, 2015, at 2:29 PM, Kristina Costa <[email-masked]>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>> Just found out on a call with NRDC that they would like HRC to make some
>>> short opening remarks on a call she has with them tomorrow. Attached are
>>> two pages of TPs that closely map the points she used for the LCV board
>>> meeting last month, with the following changes:
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> ·         Adding a reference to partnering with the states to the clean
>>> energy challenge, given NRDC’s intensive state-level work
>>>
>>> ·         Using JDP’s new formulation on Arctic drilling
>>>
>>> ·         Since they’re on the phone, adds a
>>> thank-you-looking-forward-to-questions at the end
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Apologies for the tight turn but please send edits/approvals by *4:30
>>> pm today*.
>>>
>>> <2015-10-20 NRDC talking points 215pm draft.docx>
>>>
>>>
>>
>