Subject: Re: DRAFT: latest JJ
From: Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>
To: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
Cc: Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, Matt Paul <[email-masked]>, Lily Adams <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 24 Oct 2015 13:50:46 -0400
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

We need comprehensive immigration reform with a real path to
citizenship, not offensive comments about “anchor babies.”

This isn't bad, but kinda validates the implication of anchor babies.
But don't feel hugely worried about it.

Another suggestions is to say ...not offensive name-calling toward
Mexicans, Asians, or any other group who love this country and just
want a chance to be a part of it.

Ps - Looking for a way to expand immigration issues to other groups as
well when she talks about it. This has come up w AAPI and Caribbeans
as well.

Sent from my iPhone

> On Oct 24, 2015, at 1:12 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]> wrote:
>
> Am giving HRC this new JJ draft. Please take another look and let us know what you think.
> Thanks!
> Dan
> <2015-10-24 JJ - 1pm.docx>