Subject: Re: DRAFT: Rainbow Push
From: Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>
To: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
Cc: Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>, Richard McDaniel <[email-masked]>, Corey Ciorciari <[email-masked]>, Brynne Craig <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 29 Oct 2015 16:45:28 -0400
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Might cut the Turtle reference.

Love too busy to hate.

Sent from my iPhone

On Oct 29, 2015, at 4:28 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
wrote:

This is essentially an excerpt from the rally speech.

On Thu, Oct 29, 2015 at 3:47 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> Hi all, I'd love your thoughts on this draft for tomorrow in Atlanta.  Per
> guidance from the team this speech 1) honors the legends of the civil
> rights movement and ties HRC to that history; 2) re-ups some of the more
> effective stuff we've said previously about race in America and puts it
> under our umbrella of the problems that keep families up at night; 3) rolls
> out new criminal justice reforms; 4) hits Bernie on "course correction."
>
> Please take a look. I'd love to cut a few hundred words out, so
> suggestions welcome.
> Thanks
> Dan
>

<2015-10-29 Rainbow Push - 430pm.docx>