Subject: Re: DRAFT: Remarks for Flint events
From: Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>
To: Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>
Cc: Kristina Costa <[email-masked]>, Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>, Xochitl Hinojosa <[email-masked]>, Mike Schmidt <[email-masked]>, "Ann O'Leary" <[email-masked]>, Maya Harris <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 6 Feb 2016 19:02:15 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

repairing the bonds of trust and sowing the seeds of hope.

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On Feb 6, 2016, at 6:08 PM, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]> wrote:

Church TPs first – I made some edits and comments ---- There’s also a big
piece in the NYT on VA Tech team who is engaged and it sounds like the
folks in Flint have enormous trust in them and it might be worth saying a
word of “gratitude” for the persistence and perseverance and their ongoing
help.

I’ll look at other doc next

*From:* [email-masked] [
mailto:[email-masked] <[email-masked]>] *On
Behalf Of *Kristina Costa
*Sent:* Saturday, February 06, 2016 5:46 PM
*To:* Speech Drafts
*Cc:* LaDavia Drane; Amanda Renteria; Xochitl Hinojosa; Mike Schmidt; Ann
O'Leary; Maya Harris
*Subject:* DRAFT: Remarks for Flint events

Attached are draft bullets for the two Flint events tomorrow – one set for
the church, which incorporates high-level feedback from Dan, and one short
page of TPs for the top of the meeting with the mayor. These track guidance
from the mayor’s office, the MI delegation, and folks who have been
involved in the response.

As I understand it, the format of the community event in the church is
still in flux. It is possible the QA in the middle will be dropped in favor
of testimonials before HRC speaks. Will adjust the final accordingly.

Still waiting for word from political on who she should thank/acknowledge
at top, so please let me know that ASAP as well.

Thanks all,

Kristina

<2016-02-06 Flint church TPs 430pm - JB notes.docx>