Subject: Re: DRAFT: Remarks for Flint events
From: Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>
To: Kristina Costa <[email-masked]>
Cc: Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 6 Feb 2016 19:04:47 -0500
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Over the top.

I also think we should cut the line of if I were President.  The ending is
powerful without it.

Sent from my iPhone

On Feb 6, 2016, at 6:52 PM, Kristina Costa <[email-masked]>
wrote:

I think that is over the top. And we're in a church. I think given concerns
about politicizing from both community and the MI delegation we want to
stay on the families and the kids and what needs to be done.

/KLC

On Feb 6, 2016, at 6:50 PM, Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]> wrote:

Two questions for the group.

Is it a good time to say something tougher about the Governor?

Is it over the top to say this:

·     ….if what happened in Flint had happened in Grosse Pointe, or in
Bloomfield Hills, I think we all know that we would have had a solution
yesterday.  They would have been trucking in Perrier by the caseload and
laying miles of copper pipes.

Mandy Grunwald
Grunwald Communications
202-973-9400

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Subject: RE: DRAFT: Remarks for Flint events

Electeds --- only major change is in last graph to bring together people of
Flint and the people in the room.

*From:* [email-masked] [
mailto:[email-masked] <[email-masked]?>] *On
Behalf Of *Kristina Costa
*Sent:* Saturday, February 06, 2016 5:46 PM
*To:* Speech Drafts
*Cc:* LaDavia Drane; Amanda Renteria; Xochitl Hinojosa; Mike Schmidt; Ann
O'Leary; Maya Harris
*Subject:* DRAFT: Remarks for Flint events

Attached are draft bullets for the two Flint events tomorrow – one set for
the church, which incorporates high-level feedback from Dan, and one short
page of TPs for the top of the meeting with the mayor. These track guidance
from the mayor’s office, the MI delegation, and folks who have been
involved in the response.

As I understand it, the format of the community event in the church is
still in flux. It is possible the QA in the middle will be dropped in favor
of testimonials before HRC speaks. Will adjust the final accordingly.

Still waiting for word from political on who she should thank/acknowledge
at top, so please let me know that ASAP as well.

Thanks all,

Kristina