Subject: Re: REVISED DRAFT: Talking points for tonight in Colorado
From: Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>
To: Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
Cc: Huma Abedin <[email-masked]>, Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>, Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 4 Aug 2015 16:30:01 -0400
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Really?  I thought she doesn't use a podium at Iowa/NH Organizing events?
Defer to you all, but thought that is what press is accustomed to.

On Tue, Aug 4, 2015 at 4:11 PM, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> To be clear – Huma says she’ll just use the podium.   So these TPs are
> still useful – thanks all for weighing in on them.
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> *From:* [email-masked] [mailto:
> [email-masked]] *On Behalf Of *Huma Abedin
> *Sent:* Tuesday, August 4, 2015 3:57 PM
> *To:* Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
> *Cc:* Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>; Joel Benenson <
> [email-masked]>; Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>
> *Subject:* Re: REVISED DRAFT: Talking points for tonight in Colorado
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> shes not going to be able to use this unless she has a podium
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> its different enough
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> if she had gotten it earlier, might have worked
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> On Tue, Aug 4, 2015 at 7:17 AM, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
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> Good morning all -- here are revised bullets for this evening.  I think
> they do everything we discussed.
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> Three things:
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> 1. At the top, instead of writing out entire riffs that she knows backward
> and forward from the stump, we just put in the main tent-pole sentences, to
> leave the rest to her.  You'll see.
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> 2.  The "right to rise" immigration hit is different -- take a look.
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> 3.  Added a few sentences on the Voting Rights Act.
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> HRC is departing earlier than planned this morning so I'll have to send
> her a revised version in the next 1.5 hours or so.  So please send me any
> edits asap.  (If you miss this window, the event isn't until tonight so
> we'll have time for important changes today.)
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> Thank you all for your invaluable guidance!
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> On Mon, Aug 3, 2015 at 10:31 PM, Jennifer Palmieri <
> [email-masked]> wrote:
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> Sorry!  That makes sense.
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> Sent from my iPhone
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> On Aug 3, 2015, at 10:31 PM, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
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> I think Joel's saying that we shouldn't have her saying "I believe in a
> right to rise..." which is what I have now.  I'm changing it so she's not
> endorsing that idea.  Joel let me know if I misunderstood you.
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> On Mon, Aug 3, 2015 at 10:29 PM, Jennifer Palmieri <
> [email-masked]> wrote:
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> Hm...,pretty sure we talked on the call with HRC today specifically
> about using "right to rise" formulation to hit Jeb on immigration.
> Thought you and I discussed separately, too.  Maybe not.  At any rate,
> it is the only way we make any news for the rest of the week.  If
> folks have another formulation to hit Jeb on immigration that break
> through, that is great.  Otherwise I think we stick with right to
> rise.
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> Sent from my iPhone
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> > On Aug 3, 2015, at 9:35 PM, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]> wrote:
> >
> > Megan,
> > I'm not sure about co opting right to rise.. Our mantra is get ahead and
> stay ahead and I don't thing we should confuse it but taking Jeb's language.
> >
> > Sent from my iPad
> >
> >> On Aug 3, 2015, at 6:16 PM, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
> >>
> >> Hi everyone --
> >>
> >> Attached are talking points for tomorrow night's organizing meeting in
> Colorado.
> >>
> >> After big talk from me about trying to keep this to one page, I've
> failed -- it's 2.5 pages.  I'm looking for cuts!
> >>
> >> This includes a "right to rise" immigration hit -- it's bolded.
> >>
> >> I'll be sending this to the book in 15 minutes so if anyone sees things
> that need fixing right now, let me know...
> >>
> >> Thanks!
> >> <2015-08-03 CO stump talking points 6pm.docx>
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