Subject: Re: DRAFT: Remarks for Flint events
From: "Ann O'Leary" <[email-masked]>
To: Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>
Cc: Kristina Costa <[email-masked]>, Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 6 Feb 2016 19:30:22 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Thanks, Kristina and great edits Joel.  I have added to the Mayor's tp to
try to make the point that she won't wait to be President to act and that
she won't forget Flint no matter the results of the election - but if she
is elected she will invest in long-term needs. Also, per my discussion with
Huma, I have added reference to Irwin Redlener's mobile health clinic.
Amanda - Please take a look and make sure you think it works.

On church tps, they are very moving. Very small edits from me.

On Sat, Feb 6, 2016 at 7:04 PM, Amanda Renteria <
[email-masked]> wrote:

> Over the top.
>
> I also think we should cut the line of if I were President.  The ending is
> powerful without it.
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
> On Feb 6, 2016, at 6:52 PM, Kristina Costa <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
>
> I think that is over the top. And we're in a church. I think given
> concerns about politicizing from both community and the MI delegation we
> want to stay on the families and the kids and what needs to be done.
>
> /KLC
>
> On Feb 6, 2016, at 6:50 PM, Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]> wrote:
>
>
> Two questions for the group.
>
> Is it a good time to say something tougher about the Governor?
>
> Is it over the top to say this:
>
> ·     ….if what happened in Flint had happened in Grosse Pointe, or in
> Bloomfield Hills, I think we all know that we would have had a solution
> yesterday.  They would have been trucking in Perrier by the caseload and
> laying miles of copper pipes.
>
>
>
> Mandy Grunwald
> Grunwald Communications
> 202-973-9400
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>
> To: Kristina Costa <[email-masked]>; Speech Drafts <
> [email-masked]>
> Cc: LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>; Amanda Renteria <
> [email-masked]>; Xochitl Hinojosa <
> [email-masked]>; Mike Schmidt <[email-masked]>;
> Ann O'Leary <[email-masked]>; Maya Harris <
> [email-masked]>
> Sent: Sat, Feb 6, 2016 6:16 pm
> Subject: RE: DRAFT: Remarks for Flint events
>
> Electeds --- only major change is in last graph to bring together people
> of Flint and the people in the room.
>
> *From:* [email-masked] [
> mailto:[email-masked] <[email-masked]?>]
> *On Behalf Of *Kristina Costa
> *Sent:* Saturday, February 06, 2016 5:46 PM
> *To:* Speech Drafts
> *Cc:* LaDavia Drane; Amanda Renteria; Xochitl Hinojosa; Mike Schmidt; Ann
> O'Leary; Maya Harris
> *Subject:* DRAFT: Remarks for Flint events
>
> Attached are draft bullets for the two Flint events tomorrow – one set for
> the church, which incorporates high-level feedback from Dan, and one short
> page of TPs for the top of the meeting with the mayor. These track guidance
> from the mayor’s office, the MI delegation, and folks who have been
> involved in the response.
>
> As I understand it, the format of the community event in the church is
> still in flux. It is possible the QA in the middle will be dropped in favor
> of testimonials before HRC speaks. Will adjust the final accordingly.
>
> Still waiting for word from political on who she should thank/acknowledge
> at top, so please let me know that ASAP as well.
>
> Thanks all,
>
> Kristina
>
>

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Hillary for America
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