Subject: Re: HRC @ Dinkins Forum
From: "Ann O'Leary" <[email-masked]>
To: Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>
Cc: Maya Harris <[email-masked]>, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>, John Podesta <[email-masked]>, Jim Margolis <[email-masked]>, Huma Abedin <[email-masked]>, John Anzalone <[email-masked]>, David Binder <[email-masked]>, Tony Carrk <[email-masked]>, Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>, Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>, [email-masked], Kristina Schake <[email-masked]>, Robby Mook <[email-masked]>, Ethan Gelber <[email-masked]>, Corey Cior
Date: Tue, 28 Apr 2015 14:05:16 -0700

Agree - like it and like the emotional appeal of it.

My comments on top of Maya's and Mandy's.  My one big red flag is the
discussion of community policing.  I think we need to be very careful to
couch it in community policing down the right way, given the concern that
community policing has come to mean enforcing the "broken windows" theory
of crime reduction (e.g. Eric Garner) rather than its original intent of
building up real investments and real partnership to prevent crime.
Suggestions attached.

On Tue, Apr 28, 2015 at 1:38 PM, Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]> wrote:

>
>  I think it's good too.  I tracked a few suggested changes on top of
> Maya's.
>
>  Two questions:
>
>  1.  Do we need a bit more on the economy, since so much of Baltimore
> conversation has become about poverty and hopelessness?
>
>  2.  Are we clear what we want the soundbite to be?  My guess is the body
> cameras?
>
> *Mandy Grunwald*
> *Grunwald Communications*
> *202 973-9400 <202%20973-9400>*
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Maya Harris <[email-masked]>
> To: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
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> John Podesta <[email-masked]>; Jim <[email-masked]>; Huma
> Abedin <[email-masked]>; John Anzalone <[email-masked]>;
> David Binder <[email-masked]>; Tony Carrk <
> [email-masked]>; Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>; Ann
> O'Leary <[email-masked]>; Jennifer Palmieri <
> [email-masked]>; Brian Fallon <[email-masked]>;
> Kristina Schake <[email-masked]>; Robby Mook <
> [email-masked]>; Ethan Gelber <[email-masked]>; Corey
> Ciorciari <[email-masked]>
> Sent: Tue, Apr 28, 2015 1:41 pm
> Subject: Re: HRC @ Dinkins Forum
>
>  Dan, this is terrific. I made some small suggestions in the attached.
>
>
>  On Tue, Apr 28, 2015 at 12:49 PM, Dan Schwerin <
> [email-masked]> wrote:
>
>>  Team, here is a draft for tomorrow's Dinkins speech. Would love your
>> thoughts.
>> Thanks
>>  Dan
>>
>
>