Subject: Re: DRAFT OPED: Baldwin Bill
From: Brian Fallon <[email-masked]>
To: Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
Cc: Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, Gary Gensler <[email-masked]>, Michael Shapiro <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 29 Aug 2015 12:25:05 -0400
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

This looks good to me. Only flag is "ride a revolving door" sounds a bit
off. Would "cycle through a revolving door" work better?

On Saturday, August 29, 2015, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> Hey all.  Here's a draft joint oped to be signed by Hillary and Tammy
> Baldwin, which we're looking to place asap.  Please get edits to Kristina
> Costa and me by 4pm today.  Thanks!
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