Subject: Re: DRAFT: Rainbow Push
From: Brynne Craig <[email-masked]>
To: Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>
Cc: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>, Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>, Richard McDaniel <[email-masked]>, Corey Ciorciari <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 29 Oct 2015 18:16:59 -0400
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Agree on turtle endorsement - is Rev. Lowery in attendance? If so, we
should acknowledge him.

On Thu, Oct 29, 2015 at 4:45 PM, Amanda Renteria <
[email-masked]> wrote:

> Might cut the Turtle reference.
>
> Love too busy to hate.
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
> On Oct 29, 2015, at 4:28 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
>
> This is essentially an excerpt from the rally speech.
>
> On Thu, Oct 29, 2015 at 3:47 PM, Dan Schwerin <
> [email-masked]> wrote:
>
>> Hi all, I'd love your thoughts on this draft for tomorrow in Atlanta.
>> Per guidance from the team this speech 1) honors the legends of the civil
>> rights movement and ties HRC to that history; 2) re-ups some of the more
>> effective stuff we've said previously about race in America and puts it
>> under our umbrella of the problems that keep families up at night; 3) rolls
>> out new criminal justice reforms; 4) hits Bernie on "course correction."
>>
>> Please take a look. I'd love to cut a few hundred words out, so
>> suggestions welcome.
>> Thanks
>> Dan
>>
>
> <2015-10-29 Rainbow Push - 430pm.docx>
>
>

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