Subject: Re: Follow up
From: Cheryl Mills <[email-masked]>
To: Wendy Clark <[email-masked]>
Cc: John Podesta <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 26 Mar 2015 21:24:05 -0400

just great work.

inspiring even if there are challenges - that's what makes it worth doing

On Thu, Mar 26, 2015 at 9:04 PM, Wendy Clark <[email-masked]> wrote:

> Cheryl, John,
>
> Thanks for today.
> It was really great to hear your feedback in advance of next week.
>
> We have some work to do and some time to do it.
>
> Chief areas of focus are;
>
> 1.  Better set up and sell in the It's Our Time line with both strengths
> and proactive addressing of vulnerabilities.
>
> 2. More robust demonstration of announcement phase with how we'll
> completely dominate the landscape with the meaning of It's Our Time.
>
> 3. Further build out of Humanizing Hillary section with more films and
> avenues to do so.
>
> 4. Tightening of strategic set up.
>
> 5. Parsing of extra work that muddies decision making at this stage.
>
> 6. Better way-finding throughout the presentation to show how and where in
> the journey the work fits in.
>
> Here is the link to what you saw today. Complete with the films of you
> want to watch them again. Cheryl, I'm hoping Joanne can print you a copy
> for your added feedback. We'll take it all.
>
> http://www.d5ftp.com/?u=Jy0v&p=R8dN
> Username: Jy0v   Password: R8dN
>
> I hope today was what you had expected to see. And I hope it begins to
> demonstrate that communications can help shape the conversation in a better
> way for her.
>
> Thanks again for your time and input.  Wendy
>