Subject: Re: HRC remarks in Cleveland
From: Christina Reynolds <[email-masked]>
To: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
Cc: Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>, Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>, Tracey Lewis <[email-masked]>, Tyrone Gayle <[email-masked]>, Corey Ciorciari <[email-masked]>, Karen Finney <[email-masked]>, Brynne Craig <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 26 Aug 2015 22:56:03 -0400
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Agreed. I would cut that graf.

I know research has already flagged this, but given that Trump came out
just today in an interview on the hedge fund/carried interest stuff, I
would caveat that tax language a bit. As written, I think it's just asking
for a fact-check with it fresh in people's memory.

On Wed, Aug 26, 2015 at 10:47 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]
> wrote:

> I've been having same thought on emails.
>
>
>
> > On Aug 26, 2015, at 10:22 PM, Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]> wrote:
> >
> > Don't know if you want to mention it in the foster care section, but HRC
> worked with Tom Delay and Dave Thomas of Wendy's (which is Ohio based I
> think but I don't know how they are as an employer) to pass ground breaking
> adoption/foster care legislation when she was in the White House.  It led
> to a huge increase in foster care adoptions. I don't remember the exact
> statistic.
> >
> > Second point.
> >
> > Are we sure we want emails in this?  It felt very discordant as I read
> it through.  I'm interested to know what others think.
> >
> > Thx
> >
> >
> >
> > Mandy Grunwald
> > Grunwald Communications
> > 202 973-9400
> >
> >
> >> On Aug 26, 2015, at 7:54 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
> >>
> >> Team, here are remarks for tomorrow's organizing event in Cleveland.
> We hit guns, voting rights, BLM, etc. See what you think.
> >> Thanks
> >> Dan
> >> <2015-08-26 Cleveland - 730pm.docx>
>