Subject: Re: DRAFT: Remarks in Charleston tomorrow
From: Clay Middleton <[email-masked]>
To: Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
Cc: Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, Michael Shapiro <[email-masked]>, Corey Ciorciari <[email-masked]>, Emily Aden <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 19:01:36 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Please change text Join to text Palmetto.

Can a line about veterans and military families be added... For the service
members, veterans, and their families
who....

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Together, let’s fight for the veterans of all ages who shouldn’t have to
fight for the benefits they’ve earned.  For DREAMers who would make any
parent proud. For the young activistsstanding up against systemic
injustice. For the nurses who work all night, and the truckers who drive
for miles. For the parents who put in a full day on the job, then come home to
work the second shift, taking care of their families.

v/r
Clay
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On Nov 20, 2015, at 6:13 PM, Emily Aden <[email-masked]> wrote:

Research edits attached in comments

On Fri, Nov 20, 2015 at 4:59 PM, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> Hi all --
>
> Here are long bullets for the Secretary's event in Charleston tomorrow.
>
> You'll see that these resemble what we gave her today in Tennessee and
> Kentucky.  We've got a few bullets at the start about Paris and ISIS, and a
> strong section on healthcare.   I've added more of the core economic
> message from the stump near the start.  Also added a few bullets about gun
> violence, since we are in Charleston.
>
> If you could please send me edits by 7pm, I'd appreciate it.
>
> Thanks.
>

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