Subject: Re: DRAFT: Remarks in Charleston tomorrow
From: Clay Middleton <[email-masked]>
To: Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
Cc: Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, Michael Shapiro <[email-masked]>, Corey Ciorciari <[email-masked]>, Emily Aden <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 19:12:20 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Yes. I would hope so.

v/r
Clay
Sent from my iPhone

On Nov 20, 2015, at 7:08 PM, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
wrote:

Will everyone know how to spell Palmetto?

On Fri, Nov 20, 2015 at 7:01 PM, Clay Middleton <
[email-masked]> wrote:

> Please change text Join to text Palmetto.
>
> Can a line about veterans and military families be added... For the
> service members, veterans, and their families
> who....
>
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> •
> Together, let’s fight for the veterans of all ages who shouldn’t have to
> fight for the benefits they’ve earned.  For DREAMers who would make any
> parent proud. For the young activistsstanding up against systemic
> injustice. For the nurses who work all night, and the truckers who drive
> for miles. For the parents who put in a full day on the job, then come
>  home to work the second shift, taking care of their families.
>
>
>
> v/r
> Clay
> Sent from my iPhone
>
>
> On Nov 20, 2015, at 6:13 PM, Emily Aden <[email-masked]> wrote:
>
> Research edits attached in comments
>
> On Fri, Nov 20, 2015 at 4:59 PM, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi all --
>>
>> Here are long bullets for the Secretary's event in Charleston tomorrow.
>>
>> You'll see that these resemble what we gave her today in Tennessee and
>> Kentucky.  We've got a few bullets at the start about Paris and ISIS, and a
>> strong section on healthcare.   I've added more of the core economic
>> message from the stump near the start.  Also added a few bullets about gun
>> violence, since we are in Charleston.
>>
>> If you could please send me edits by 7pm, I'd appreciate it.
>>
>> Thanks.
>>
>
> <2015-11-20 Charleston Democratic Party rally draft 5pm-EA.docx>
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