Subject: Re: DRAFT: Remarks in Charleston tomorrow
From: Clay Middleton <[email-masked]>
To: Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
Cc: Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, Michael Shapiro <[email-masked]>, Corey Ciorciari <[email-masked]>, Emily Aden <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 19:13:11 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Understood. We should be good.

v/r
Clay
Sent from my iPhone

On Nov 20, 2015, at 7:10 PM, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
wrote:

I realize it's the Palmetto state obviously... just wondering if there are
going to be a lot of palmeto/palmeadow/etc

On Fri, Nov 20, 2015 at 7:08 PM, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> Will everyone know how to spell Palmetto?
>
> On Fri, Nov 20, 2015 at 7:01 PM, Clay Middleton <
> [email-masked]> wrote:
>
>> Please change text Join to text Palmetto.
>>
>> Can a line about veterans and military families be added... For the
>> service members, veterans, and their families
>> who....
>>
>>
>> •
>> Together, let’s fight for the veterans of all ages who shouldn’t have to
>> fight for the benefits they’ve earned.  For DREAMers who would make any
>> parent proud. For the young activistsstanding up against systemic
>> injustice. For the nurses who work all night, and the truckers who drive
>> for miles. For the parents who put in a full day on the job, then come
>>  home to work the second shift, taking care of their families.
>>
>>
>>
>> v/r
>> Clay
>> Sent from my iPhone
>>
>>
>> On Nov 20, 2015, at 6:13 PM, Emily Aden <[email-masked]> wrote:
>>
>> Research edits attached in comments
>>
>> On Fri, Nov 20, 2015 at 4:59 PM, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]
>> > wrote:
>>
>>> Hi all --
>>>
>>> Here are long bullets for the Secretary's event in Charleston tomorrow.
>>>
>>> You'll see that these resemble what we gave her today in Tennessee and
>>> Kentucky.  We've got a few bullets at the start about Paris and ISIS, and a
>>> strong section on healthcare.   I've added more of the core economic
>>> message from the stump near the start.  Also added a few bullets about gun
>>> violence, since we are in Charleston.
>>>
>>> If you could please send me edits by 7pm, I'd appreciate it.
>>>
>>> Thanks.
>>>
>>
>> <2015-11-20 Charleston Democratic Party rally draft 5pm-EA.docx>
>>
>>
>