Subject: Re: UPDATED: Alabama remarks
From: Connolly Keigher <[email-masked]>
To: Lauren Peterson <[email-masked]>
Cc: Speech Book <[email-masked]>, Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>, Xochitl Hinojosa <[email-masked]>, Richard McDaniel <[email-masked]>, Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>, Karen Finney <[email-masked]>, Ian Sams <[email-masked]>, Tyrone Gayle <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 17 Oct 2015 10:50:19 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Thanks

On Oct 17, 2015, at 10:48 AM, Lauren Peterson <[email-masked]>
wrote:

Updated prisons/detention centers to say:

"...end the privatization of prisons and immigrant detention centers that
have turned incarceration into a for-profit industry."

Re-attaching both docs though only the remarks have changed from last send.
Thank you all - these should be final.

On Sat, Oct 17, 2015 at 11:43 AM, Lauren Peterson <
[email-masked]> wrote:

> Sorry - please hold - one more on the remarks.
>
> On Sat, Oct 17, 2015 at 11:32 AM, Lauren Peterson <
> [email-masked]> wrote:
>
>> Per a few conversations just now, and after talking with Connolly, I've
>> made small updates to the remarks.
>>
>> They are:
>>
>> 1. Change "Alabamans" to "Alabamians"
>> 2. Change "end the requirement that" to "get rid of the law that" -- for
>> research
>> 3. Add "end immigrant detention centers"
>>
>> Have updated the op-ed where appropriate and changed served time to "have
>> served their time".
>>
>> Thank you!
>>
>> On Sat, Oct 17, 2015 at 8:58 AM, Lauren Peterson <
>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>
>>> Updating the subject line for clarity and adding speech drafts!
>>>
>>> (Same documents I sent at 7:23 a.m.)
>>>
>>> Thanks!
>>>
>>> On Sat, Oct 17, 2015 at 7:23 AM, Lauren Peterson <
>>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Updated and formatted, attached here.
>>>>
>>>> Thank you!
>>>>
>>>> On Fri, Oct 16, 2015 at 9:57 PM, Lauren Peterson <
>>>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi everyone -
>>>>>
>>>>> Here are draft remarks for tomorrow. We are working on getting further
>>>>> guidance from the ground as the Alabama situation develops, but sending
>>>>> along in the meantime.
>>>>>
>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>
>>>>> LP
>>>>> 6082179231
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>
>
<20151017 Alabama Remarks - large - FINAL 11 am.docx>
<10.16 Hillary Clinton Op-Ed - Alabama Voting Rights.docx>