Subject: Re: DRAFT: Marie Claire guns essay [edits by 4pm]
From: Corey Ciorciari <[email-masked]>
To: "De'Ara Balenger" <[email-masked]>
Cc: Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>, Emily Aden <[email-masked]>, Lauren Peterson <[email-masked]>, Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, Nick Merrill <[email-masked]>, LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 14 Jan 2016 15:56:42 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

You know where I stand on this. It can be racially motivated and gun
violence should still very much be part of the discussion. Even more so
here given that Jordan's mom is one of the leading gun violence prevention
proponents in the country.

On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 3:51 PM, De'Ara Balenger <
[email-masked]> wrote:

> This is great. My edits are attached. The only flag here is that Jordan
> Davis was killed by a white man, so arguably - this crime was racially
> motivated, which takes this outside the discussion of gun violence. Was
> there another mother in the Chicago meeting where the shooting was NOT
> racially motivated? If yes, we should use that story instead of Jordan
> Davis.
>
> Thanks!
>
> On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 3:35 PM, Amanda Renteria <
> [email-masked]> wrote:
>
>> This is a great piece.
>>
>> On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 3:33 PM, Corey Ciorciari <
>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>
>>> Love it. Edits attached.
>>>
>>> On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 2:17 PM, Emily Aden <[email-masked]>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Minor research edit in comments
>>>>
>>>> On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 1:46 PM, Lauren Peterson <
>>>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hey all --
>>>>>
>>>>> Marie Claire has partnered with Harvard on a study that looks at women
>>>>> and guns -- their attitudes, their experiences, etc. They're publishing
>>>>> their findings soon, and they've asked Hillary to contribute an essay on
>>>>> the subject.
>>>>>
>>>>> Attached is a draft from me + Megan. This is all coming together
>>>>> pretty quickly, so if everyone could send edits by 4pm, that would be
>>>>> great.
>>>>>
>>>>> De'Ara and LaDavia: This refers to her meeting with the mothers in
>>>>> Chicago. Please confirm this is okay.
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks!
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> --
>>> Corey Ciorciari
>>> Policy Department
>>> Hillary for America
>>> @CoreyCiorciari
>>>
>>
>>
>>
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>
>
>
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