Subject: Re: For the book: TPs for Mothers of the Movement
From: Corey Ciorciari <[email-masked]>
To: Kristina Costa <[email-masked]>
Cc: Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>, Speech Book <[email-masked]>, Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 22 Feb 2016 21:33:34 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Sorry, reading again with Maya and I misread your edits Jen.

To restate, I think it might be worth pulling the moms of gun violence into
the gun violence section so that we don't conflate police vs. guns.

On Mon, Feb 22, 2016 at 9:14 PM, Corey Ciorciari <
[email-masked]> wrote:

> Just need to sync up the first two paragraphs of the Mothers section. Not
> all those mothers had children that died in police incidents. Then we can
> pull the names of moms who lost children to guns into the guns section.
>
> On Mon, Feb 22, 2016 at 9:09 PM, Kristina Costa <[email-masked]
> > wrote:
>
>> So the idea was to give her some units she can riff on. Not expecting to
>> be delivered as written.
>>
>> /KLC
>>
>> On Feb 22, 2016, at 9:07 PM, Kristina Costa <[email-masked]>
>> wrote:
>>
>> No podium. They will all be seated.
>>
>> /KLC
>>
>> On Feb 22, 2016, at 9:07 PM, Jennifer Palmieri <
>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>
>> Sooo...i made edits but blew it and did not track changes.
>>
>> I combined Mothers, systemic racism and criminal justice in one section.
>>
>> Anyone know if she is going to have a podium at this one?
>>
>> On Mon, Feb 22, 2016 at 8:30 PM, Kristina Costa <
>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>
>>> Attaching updated TPs for HRC’s remarks with the Mothers of the Movement
>>> tomorrow. Will send any further edits that come in overnight.
>>>
>>
>> <2016-02-22 mothers of the movement roundtable 8pm jmp revisions.docx>
>>
>>
>
>
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