Subject: DRAFT: Atlanta Rally
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>, Richard McDaniel <[email-masked]>, Corey Ciorciari <[email-masked]>, Brynne Craig <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 29 Oct 2015 15:47:51 -0400
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Hi all, I'd love your thoughts on this draft for tomorrow in Atlanta.  Per
guidance from the team this speech 1) honors the legends of the civil
rights movement and ties HRC to that history; 2) re-ups some of the more
effective stuff we've said previously about race in America and puts it
under our umbrella of the problems that keep families up at night; 3) rolls
out new criminal justice reforms; 4) hits Bernie on "course correction."

Please take a look. I'd love to cut a few hundred words out, so suggestions
welcome.
Thanks
Dan