Subject: Re: DRAFT: Atlanta Rally - revised
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Karen Finney <[email-masked]>
Cc: Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>, Richard McDaniel <[email-masked]>, Corey Ciorciari <[email-masked]>, Brynne Craig <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 30 Oct 2015 09:39:36 -0400
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

its in there on page 10, but just one line for now.

On Fri, Oct 30, 2015 at 9:38 AM, Karen Finney <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> Beautiful.
> Love the line about kitchen table to peace table.
> Did the editor in chief not want to say anything about guns? (Or did I
> totally miss it?)
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
> > On Oct 30, 2015, at 9:21 AM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
> >
> > The Secretary wanted to rework this speech so here's a new draft. If
> possible, would love comments in next hour pls.
> > MAYA/JAKE/COREY, pls take a close look at ban the box and rest of policy
> section.
> > <2015-10-30 Atlanta rally - 9am.docx>
>