Subject: UPDATED DRAFT: Remarks at Nevada Democratic Party Dinner
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Emmy Ruiz <[email-masked]>, Tim Hogan <[email-masked]>, Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 4 Jan 2016 12:50:50 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Thanks for the helpful feedback so far.  Here's an updated draft.

On Mon, Jan 4, 2016 at 12:24 AM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> On Wednesday, HRC is speaking at the Democratic Party dinner in Nevada,
> along with the other candidates. She has about 15 minutes. Emmy asked that
> we emphasize the importance of state party building efforts and electing
> Dems up and down the ticket, immigration reform, and contrast with local
> Republicans (as we've done to good effect in Iowa).  This is also an
> opportunity to lay out the closing argument more robustly than we've doing
> in town hall toppers so far, raising the stakes in the election by painting
> a picture of how a Republican President would rip away our progress and
> explaining why we need to elect someone who has what it takes to get the
> job done on the economy, security, and problems that keep families up at
> night.  Plus, starting to draw sharper contrasts with Sanders, as HRC has
> indicated.  All in 15 minutes!
> Attached is a draft for discussion. (And please keep in mind that for
> anything we add, we also need to cut.)
> Thanks
> Dan
>