Subject: Re: Revised Message Frame
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Jim <[email-masked]>, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>, Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>, Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>, Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>, Robby Mook <[email-masked]>, John Podesta <[email-masked]>, Huma Abedin <[email-masked]>, John Anzalone <[email-masked]>, David Binder <[email-masked]>, Oren Shur <[email-masked]>, Navin Nayak <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 8 Feb 2016 13:49:34 -0500

Based on conversations with Mandy and Jen and some more thinking, here's
another turn of the crank on this.

On Mon, Feb 8, 2016 at 10:41 AM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> So Jake and I put our heads together again after our call this morning and
> have revised this again. Trying to get sharper.
>
> On Mon, Feb 8, 2016 at 12:57 AM, Dan Schwerin <
> [email-masked]> wrote:
>
>> Here's an updated draft of this new "breaking barriers" message frame.
>> It's now a 2-pager.  I've tried to do a number of things here: more clearly
>> define the choice, cast her record and agenda in moral justice terms,
>> ground everything in her life's work and values, and at places give it more
>> edge and contrast.  See what you think...
>>
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