Subject: Re: DRAFT: South Carolina Primary Day Remarks
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, Clay Middleton <[email-masked]>, Stephanie Formas <[email-masked]>, Varun Anand <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 27 Feb 2016 12:19:44 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

A few small tweaks here. Would be great if folks could look at this in next
couple of hours.
Thanks
Dan

On Sat, Feb 27, 2016 at 12:46 AM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]
> wrote:

> Team, here is a draft for Tuesday night's remarks after the South Carolina
> primary.  It builds on what worked in Nevada, but reverses the order to
> give more prominence to the "we're all in this together and all have to do
> our part" section. You'll see prominent placement for the Mothers of the
> Movement, Flint, and our favorite corporate villains.  It's also infused
> with a bit more "love & kindness," to elevate the tone of a week defined by
> Republican mud wrestling.
> Please send me any comments or concerns.
> Thanks
> Dan
>