Subject: Re: Big revision from WJC
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>
Cc: Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>, Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>, John Podesta <[email-masked]>, Megan Rooney <[email-masked]>, Huma Abedin <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 27 Feb 2016 18:25:10 -0500

Good point, I was worried about that too.  Try this version, see if it's
better.

On Sat, Feb 27, 2016 at 6:22 PM, Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]> wrote:

> I miss the corporate greed examples near the front - they are important,
>
> And the barriers transition feels a little rocky and redundant.
>
> Mandy Grunwald
> Grunwald Communications
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>
> > On Feb 27, 2016, at 6:13 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
> wrote:
> >
> > WJC asked that we flip two big sections of the speech so the Moms and
> Flint move toward the end and the affirmative agenda moves toward the
> front.  I think it probably works. Can you take a quick look before I shoot
> over to HRC?
> > <2016-02-27 SC Primary Remarks - 530pm.docx>
>