Subject: REVISED DRAFT: Remarks at Michigan Dem Party Reception
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>, Walt Herzig <[email-masked]>, Derrick Harkins <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 5 Mar 2016 12:35:43 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Revised draft for tonight is attached.  Reorganized and trimmed a bit.
Thanks
Dan

On Fri, Mar 4, 2016 at 8:17 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> Hi all, tomorrow night's speech at the Michigan Democratic Party reception
> will double as our response to the elections in Louisiana, Kansas, and
> Nebraska.  You'll see that this draft combines the Super Tuesday remarks
> with elements of today's Detroit Jobs speech, plus a final section linking
> Flint, Detroit's schools, and the tragedy and renewal of New Orleans.
> Would love your thoughts.
> Thanks
> Dan
>