Subject: Re: DRAFT: Remarks at church town-hall in Cleveland
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Addisu Demissie <[email-masked]>
Cc: Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>, Aaron Pickrell <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 11 Mar 2016 13:57:57 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

Got it, thank you.

On Fri, Mar 11, 2016 at 12:10 PM, Addisu Demissie <
[email-masked]> wrote:

> I always think that starting a speech with scripture in a black church is
> a good idea - even if it's just "this is the day that the Lord has
> made...".  But I defer to LaDavia entirely on this one as it's her home
> turf.
>
> On Fri, Mar 11, 2016 at 8:26 AM, Dan Schwerin <
> [email-masked]> wrote:
>
>> HRC is supposed to talk for 15 minutes from a podium at the top of a town
>> hall meeting tomorrow at Olivet Institutional Baptist Church in
>> Cleveland.  The attached draft is similar to what we've been doing recently
>> -- breaking down barriers, jobs, schools, systemic racism, a little
>> scripture.  I think some of the Mothers of the Movement are going to be
>> there, so that should give this some extra lift.
>>
>> There's not much contrast here, largely because it's at church, but if
>> folks think there should be more, please let me know. And please send along
>> any other comments or concerns.
>> Thanks
>> Dan
>>
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