Subject: REVISED: HRC's speech at AIPAC
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
Cc: Oren Fliegelman <[email-masked]>, Laura Rosenberger <[email-masked]>, Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 20 Mar 2016 01:54:02 -0400

We received a lot of good feedback on our AIPAC draft today and have
revised accordingly.  New version is attached with tracked changes.  Would
be great if you could take one more look, including at language on
settlements.  We're also looking for places to cut.
Thanks very much.
Dan

On Sat, Mar 19, 2016 at 2:41 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
wrote:

> Good afternoon --
>
> On Monday morning, HRC is going to speak at AIPAC (all the Republican
> candidates speak Monday evening).  If you have time today, we'd love your
> thoughts on the attached draft of her speech.  It's more pointedly
> political than some of our previous outings, but that reflects the moment
> we're in. We're not eager to add a lot of length here, but if you see an
> important issue we're missing, or a landmine we're about to step on, please
> let us know.
>
> Also, please copy Oren on your responses so we can track.
>
> Thanks very much.
> Dan
>