Subject: Re: For Review: HRC @ Steak Fry & DSCC fundraiser
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Cheryl Mills <[email-masked]>
Cc: Philippe Reines <[email-masked]>, Robert Mook <[email-masked]>, Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>, John Podesta <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 9 Sep 2014 11:38:59 +0000

She hasn't seen this yet so isn't wed to anything.

> On Sep 9, 2014, at 6:12 AM, "Cheryl Mills" <[email-masked]> wrote:
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> Dan
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> Before engaging, how much of the Harkin draft is she wed to so I don't do my usual too many line edits?
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> I just skimmed the top - and b/c I am so used to her now speaking in less partisan but compelling tones, this tonally strikes me quite a bit. 
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> To be clear, Not sure we can walk any other line at a classic dem red meat event but listening to WJC last night - he made the case for we needed to be for and why that was a stronger future for everyone, which was compelling. 
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> So before digging in, can you give me  where she is on this draft?
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> cdm
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>> On Sep 8, 2014, at 10:11 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]> wrote:
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>> All, tomorrow HRC is doing her first political event, a DSCC women’s fundraiser at Whitehaven.  Then, as you know, she’s doing the Harkin Steak Fry over the weekend. 
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>> I’m attaching draft remarks for both events and would love your feedback.  
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>> I’ve drawn from the narratives we discussed with her last week (and it would still be great to get your comments on that as well), plus requests from the candidates, and some past speeches, etc.  I imagine folks will have more to say about the Steak Fry, but please look at the DSCC as well since its more urgent.
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>> Thanks
>> Dan
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>> <2014-09-08 - Harkin Steak Fry - 9pm.docx>
>> <2014-09-08 DSCC.docx>