Subject: Re: For Review: HRC @ Steak Fry
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Robert Mook <[email-masked]>, Philippe Reines <[email-masked]>, Huma Abedin <[email-masked]>, Cheryl Mills <[email-masked]>, Ethan Gelber <[email-masked]>, John Podesta <[email-masked]>, Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>, Nick Merrill <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 12 Sep 2014 07:03:38 +0000

Revised to reflect everyone¹s feedback, plus shortened to get us down to
around 15 minutes. Teresa V and Lorraine V both have reviewed for Iowa
sensibilities. I asked Vietor and Favreau to read it from an Obama
perspective. Think we¹re getting pretty close here.

On 9/11/14, 9:56 AM, "Robert Mook" <[email-masked]> wrote:

>Kudos, Dan.  This is shaping up really nicely.
>
>On Wed, Sep 10, 2014 at 8:48 PM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
>wrote:
>> All, here¹s the latest draft of the steak fry remarks.  It¹s a speech
>>about
>> what spurs us into public service.  Please send me any comments or
>> suggestions (especially for cuts).
>> Thanks
>> Dan