Subject: Stump Speech
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Robby Mook <[email-masked]>, Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>, Kristina Schake <[email-masked]>, Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>, "Margolis, Jim" <[email-masked]>, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>, John Anzalone <[email-masked]>, Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>, John Podesta <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 23 Mar 2015 17:48:04 +0000

I think it was Mark Twain who said, "If I had more time, I would have written a shorter letter."  Well, if I had more time, I would have written a shorter stump speech (and a better one too!)  But we need to get started so here's a very rough first draft.  I began with the language from the message architecture and built around it with themes HRC talked about on Friday and in previous discussions, and then layered in bio, policy, GOP zingers, and accomplishments.  I'm sure you'll all have lots of thoughts about how to make this much tighter and stronger, but I hope it's a useful beginning.
Looking forward to discussing at 5pm.
Thanks
Dan