Subject: Re: Launch Speech Outline
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>
Cc: Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>, Jim Margolis <[email-masked]>, John Anzalone <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>, Shannon Currie <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 5 May 2015 21:50:42 -0400

Thanks all.
And Jim, I can punch up the "It's Your Time" before sending. It's in here
but not prominently.
Dan

On Tue, May 5, 2015 at 9:49 PM, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]> wrote:

>  I’m in the same place on this.  Let’s send; tell her it’s a work in
> progress and we know we have more work to do.
>
>
>
> Let’s get some comments back but if not, let’s work on it tomorrow at HQ
>
>
>
> *From:* Mandy Grunwald [mailto:[email-masked]]
> *Sent:* Tuesday, May 05, 2015 9:19 PM
> *To:* [email-masked]; Joel Benenson; Jim Margolis; John
> Anzalone; [email-masked]; [email-masked];
> [email-masked]; [email-masked];
> [email-masked]; [email-masked];
> [email-masked]
> *Cc:* Shannon Currie
> *Subject:* Re: Launch Speech Outline
>
>
>
> Dan,
>
> I think this is much improved.
>
> It's still not quite there but I am fine sending this to HRC like this.
>
> It's a good basis for conversation.
>
> thx
>
> mandy
>
> *Mandy Grunwald*
>
> *Grunwald Communications*
>
> *202 973-9400 <202%20973-9400>*
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>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
> To: Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>; Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>;
> Jim <[email-masked]>; John Anzalone <[email-masked]>; David
> Binder <[email-masked]>; Huma Abedin <[email-masked]>;
> Robby Mook <[email-masked]>; John Podesta <[email-masked]>;
> Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>; Kristina Schake <
> [email-masked]>; Jennifer Palmieri <
> [email-masked]>
> Cc: Shannon Currie <[email-masked]>
> Sent: Tue, May 5, 2015 9:09 pm
> Subject: Launch Speech Outline
>
> Team, as promised, here is a revised draft outline for the launch speech.
> This was a quick revision obviously, but hopefully you'll find it reflects
> the main thrust of our discussion.  Please send any final edits or
> suggestions by 10pm.  Then we'll send on to HRC so she can begin thinking
> about it with us.  And of course this is just the beginning of what I hope
> will be a highly collaborative process.
>
> Thanks
>
> Dan
>