Subject: Re: Voting Rights Speech
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>
Cc: John Podesta <[email-masked]>, Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>, Kristina Schake <[email-masked]>, Robby Mook <[email-masked]>, Huma Abedin <[email-masked]>, Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>, Jim Margolis <[email-masked]>, Jake Sullivan <[email-masked]>, Maya Harris <[email-masked]>, John Anzalone <[email-masked]>, David Binder <[email-masked]>, Marlon Marshall <[email-masked]>, Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>, Brynne Craig <[email-masked]>, Teddy Goff <tgo
Date: Wed, 3 Jun 2015 23:51:15 -0400

I'll make that change

On Jun 3, 2015, at 11:16 PM, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]> wrote:

  Shouldn’t we use the word “vote” instead of “participate”?  It’s a voting
rights speech and this is one of the potential sound bites so I would think
vote is better choice

In the greatest democracy on earth, we should be clearing the way for more
people to participate, not putting up roadblocks.

*From:* Dan Schwerin [mailto:[email-masked]
<[email-masked]>]
*Sent:* Wednesday, June 03, 2015 7:14 PM
*To:* John Podesta; Jennifer Palmieri; Kristina Schake; Robby Mook; Huma
Abedin; Joel Benenson; Mandy Grunwald; Jim Margolis; Jake Sullivan; Maya
Harris; John Anzalone; David Binder; Marlon Marshall; Amanda Renteria;
Brynne Craig; Teddy Goff; Brian Fallon; Tony Carrk
*Subject:* Re: Voting Rights Speech

Thanks for all the helpful feedback today. Sending back around this revised
draft.

Best,

Dan

On Wed, Jun 3, 2015 at 5:19 AM, Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
wrote:

Team, here's a draft speech on voting rights for the Barbara Jordan event
in Texas on Thursday.  Robby asked for extra emphasis on young voters,
which you'll see in here. You'll also see our first hits on individual
Republican candidates by name.

Please send me any edits or suggestions.

Thanks

Dan