Subject: Jeff Shesol
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Robby Mook <[email-masked]>, Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>, John Podesta <[email-masked]>, Kristina Schake <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 11 Jun 2015 00:08:49 -0400

I asked Jeff Shesol at West Wing Writers, who I like and trust, to give the
latest draft a read, plus the 6/8 version with the nurse.  Here's his take
on where we are:

"This is terrific. Really terrific! A big step up from the last version. It
shows she's got energy for the fight; she's got ideas; she's got a breadth
of vision; and she's someone who really understands (and can speak for and
speak to) the aspirations of everyday Americans. I think you're really
close to a finished product here."

His one big concern is that he thinks our four buckets should be
called something other than fights.