Subject: Re: La Raza remarks
From: Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
To: Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>
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Date: Mon, 13 Jul 2015 12:42:07 -0400

Good fix

On Jul 13, 2015, at 12:27 PM, Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]> wrote:

Maybe the way to deal with Joel's concern about Basta -- is to say it in
English first.

 "I have one word…enough!  basta!"

*Mandy Grunwald*
*Grunwald Communications*
*202 973-9400*

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Subject: Re: La Raza remarks

 thanks, joel. that's very helpful.

 On Mon, Jul 13, 2015 at 9:58 AM, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>
wrote:

>  My one big concern is that we are tending to weaken the core argument of
> her campaign:  When she says “to make the economy work for everyone”  ---
> that sounds like something anyone could say and doesn’t feel like it taps
> any values enough.
>
> ALT –  Trying to get something a little more visceral/emotional in here in
> what otherwise is still a pretty intellectual speech because we’re largely
> using our econ speech.
>
> I’m running to revive the basic bargain of America: if you do you work
> hard and do your part you should be able to get ahead and stay ahead.  That
> bargain and the ideals that you and I believe in are what always made us
> great: that we are at our best when lift each other up and leave non one
> behind;  when we have each other’s back and don’t turn our backs on each
> other; when we recognize that families are the backbone of our country and
> when families are stronger, America is stronger.”
>
>  *From:* Margolis, Jim [mailto:[email-masked]]
> *Sent:* Monday, July 13, 2015 9:43 AM
> *To:* Dan Schwerin; Joel Benenson; Mandy Grunwald; John Podesta; Huma
> Abedin; John Anzalone; David Binder; Jennifer Palmieri; Kristina Schake;
> Robby Mook; Jake Sullivan; Maya Harris; Amanda Renteria; Marlon Marshall;
> Brian Fallon
> *Cc:* Lauren Peterson
> *Subject:* Re: La Raza remarks
>
>  Dan, I know time is tight.  So just two quick notes.
>  1.  When she does the value  of fixing the immigration system: ”Fixing
> our broken immigration system would lower the likelihood of exploitation
> and suppressed wages – and potentially create billions of dollars in
> additional tax revenue.   And the positive effects will ripple out across
> our economy. "
>
>  I would add for emphasis at the end:*  And the positive effects will
> ripple out across our economy, benefiting everyone in the nation.*
>
>  2.  She better practice Basta or it’s gonna sound like…  "I have one
> word for you:* bastard*! "
>
>
>  *From: *Dan Schwerin <[email-masked]>
> *Date: *Monday, July 13, 2015 at 8:37 AM
> *To: *Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>, Mandy Grunwald <[email-masked]>,
> GMMB GMMB <[email-masked]>, John Podesta <[email-masked]>,
> Huma Abedin <[email-masked]>, John Anzalone <[email-masked]>,
> David Binder <[email-masked]>, Jennifer Palmieri <
> [email-masked]>, Kristina Schake <[email-masked]>,
> Robby Mook <[email-masked]>, Jake Sullivan <
> [email-masked]>, Maya Harris <[email-masked]>,
> Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>, Marlon Marshall <
> [email-masked]>, Brian Fallon <[email-masked]>
> *Cc: *Lauren Peterson <[email-masked]>
> *Subject: *La Raza remarks
>
>   Afternoon remarks attached. Pls take a look at the Trump hit.
>  Thanks
>  Dan
>
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